Dirty Talk
Angela Hides the Sausage
Book 6 of Dorm Room Dares
8,677 words; Published: December 2019
M~F / Dubcon / Public
How to seduce a shy guy: first, distract him.
When providence delivers Scoot the nimble-fingered surfer into Angela and Rupali's clutches, the burning question is not -whether- to seduce him, but how. Angela had already delivered herself naked into his arms, and she got nothing more for her troubles than a cuddle. Not even a grope, for pity's sake. The man is unsleazable.
It's time to turn up the heat, and Coogee Beach is the perfect for some summer fun. Hidden from prying eyes beneath the rolling swells, Angela gets busy melting Scoot's cool facade, and while he woos her with a racy story, she gets busy following along with the actions. It's getting mighty wet and warm beneath those waves, and Scoot's so focussed on his dirty talk, he doesn't even notice she's no longer using her hands.
For only the second time in my life, I'm speechless...
I've only been speechless one other time, and that was when the guy I was standing Best Man at a wedding gave the most heartfelt speech I've ever heard.
BurningMonkey - Literotica
The Author's Story
I didn't know where this was going when I was writing it, I just took some horny characters and let them follow their instincts. All I knew for sure was that I wanted to include a personal fantasy: sex on a moving surfboard. The objective was to get Spike (now Scoot in the re-write) and Belinda (now Angela) on a surfboard, but I just couldn't put it together and make it even remotely realistic. I already had the dirty-talk scene with Rupali written, so it was a logical progression to include the surfboard-sex fantasy as more dirty talk.
This is one of my lowest rating stories, but is strangely one of my favorites. I love the layering in the two explicit scenes. The fact that the talk is sexy, but there is also something else going on. But my favorite bit is that both scenes have elements of what I would call semi-consensual sex, or dubcon, where one of the participants knows more about what is happening than the other.