Fitted
Tale of a Shoe Store Jezebel
Book 9 of Dorm Room Dares
18,072 words; Published: January 2020
M~F / Dubcon / Sexgame / Public
Pantiless, her bare feet in the clerk's lap, Rupali knows exactly what she wants—to be fitted.
When Rupali reveals a private fantasy to flash the clerk while being fitted for new shoes, her gregarious friend Angela is quick to pounce, scouting just the right store and just the right young man to make the Indian maid’s foot-fetish fantasy a reality.
Armed with short hemlines and absent undergarments, the girls set forth on their mission, but never did Rupali anticipate the steely resolve of the store clerk. No matter how she parts he knees, how she touches him with her toes, his eyes will not go where she longs for them to linger.
When all seems lost, Angela comes to the rescue, and together she and Raj take control, binding Rupali will and giving her the fitting she so truly craves.
Fitted is a full-length sizzling novella, originally published under the title Sundara (copyright 2015) by Belinda LaPage.
Your talent is seen here as you so easily switch narration in this series from Blin to Rupali, and it all works so smoothly.
SplendidSpunk - Literotica
Story was very enticing and lived up to my high hopes I had for it. Excellent take.
loveupskirt - Literotica
The Author's Story
Fitted (original title: Sundara) is the first of my stories where the idea came from someone's imagination other than my own. I had been working the idea of a bold new Mr Gallows invention into a story for a while, but it was really JUST a story about the toy, and it wasn't very interesting.
When user @loveupskirt asked authors on the Literotica Story Ideas forum to write a story about a lady flashing the clerk in a shoe store - ideally while her husband watches - the connection with playful Agnela and Rupali was instantaneous and I knew that shoe shopping would be their next adventure.
As the story began, Rupali was the reluctant participant in my mind and Angela was the voyeur who was goading her into it; but as I got to the flashback (where the girls discuss the fantasy) it just made more sense for this to be Rupali's fantasy.
The other fun thing about this story is that it's my first Headmaster story NOT narrated by Angela. That was really hard - making Angela take the back seat - but it was so much fun as well. I loved describing Angie from somebody else's point of view. The original Sundara was written in first-person POV with Rupali as narrator, but I edited it to third-person in the rewrite.
For those of you arguing Mannequin was not from Angela's perspective, and neither was Turn for You, both of those stories were added to the Dorm Room Dares canon in the rewrite.